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It Snowed Last Night: A poem about snow
Posted by lostcerebellum, Dec 15, 2009. 4353 views. ID = 3028

It Snowed Last Night

Posted by lostcerebellum, Dec 15, 2009. 4353 views. ID = 3028
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I have to admit, it certainly was pretty when I woke up this morning.
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I woke up to a winter wonderland
Of soft white cotton piled on all the trees.
It brought me recollections oh so grand,
Of youth, and times I sat on Santa’s knees.

I woke up to a world changed overnight
By fluffy little cotton balls of snow
That gave the world a blanket pure and white,
And made it seem like it was all aglow.

I woke up to a world so gleaming bright
And beautiful, it made my spirit soar.
To think that such a lovely, gorgeous sight
Means, "Time to get the shovel out once more".


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Comments


Jeff Howe
Dec 15, 2009
Very well written, smoothly metered... funny, tongue-in-cheeky ending. Excellent presentation.
   ~Posted by Jeff Howe, Dec 15, 2009

Mathax
Dec 15, 2009
It snowed where I live last night too.
   ~Posted by Mathax, Dec 15, 2009

Laura
Dec 15, 2009
This is great :-)
   ~Posted by Laura, Dec 15, 2009

Joy12
Nov 19, 2010
Nice snow scene personalized. The last line brings a sense of familiarity. Thank you for sharing your talent.
   ~Posted by Joy12, Nov 19, 2010



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