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A New Winter: The joys of having fun in the snow.
Posted by lindareed, Dec 7, 2009. 2055 views. ID = 3006

A New Winter

Posted by lindareed, Dec 7, 2009. 2055 views. ID = 3006
This post was written in 20 minutes.
This is the first time I've ever written poetry in this format. I must admit, I didn't quite know what I was doing. But I hope everyone enjoys it!
This post has been awarded 12 stars by 3 readers.

i smile
as my nose
grows numb
and starts
to run profusely
i'm still
having fun
my frigid lips
release
an icy breath
of steam
that rises
and evaporates
into
nothingness
i hear
the quiet swishing
of sleighs
rushing sliding
down the hill
i stoop
to gather more
but i am
hit
with a
tight ball
of snow
i giggle
as i throw
one in return
our laughter
greets
a new winter

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Mathax
Dec 8, 2009
I'd be interested in what else you could write.
   ~Posted by Mathax, Dec 8, 2009



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