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The following is a piece of writing submitted by ashamed1 on June 26, 2009
"i wrote this one in the pit of loneliness just a couple of days ago the title is actually what is wrong with me but i knew this went perfect for loneliness"

Alphabet Soup - L

LONELINESS

What is wrong with me,

I'm 19,

Healthy,

Kind,

Caring.



Why don't you like me,

I don't judge,

Don't discriminate,

Don't pick favorites,

Never deceive.



Why can't you love me,

I never lie,

I'm always there,

I won't hurt you,

I will never break your heart.



Why don't you want to be around me,

I don't stink,

I dont make fun of you,

I would never throw you to the curb,

I won't let anyone else hurt you.



So please tell me what is wrong with me,

What makes me different from him or her,

What makes them any better than me,

What makes you think they won't hurt you,

What makes me so wrong for you.

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