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A Trip to the Mall: a poem about a bad day at the mall
Posted by Turtle :], Apr 13, 2009. 897 views. ID = 2533

A Trip to the Mall

Posted by Turtle :], Apr 13, 2009. 897 views. ID = 2533
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The trip to the mall was as disastrous as it could get.
The two girls who went got very, very wet.
The fountain that doused them drenched them in water.
Oh how their father was bothered by their wet white t-shirts
as other boys stared and dared to look too long.
The trip to the mall was as disastrous as it could get.
The two girls left to find their lost sister,
who dithered and withered in the corner of the stall in the middle of the mall,
And once they found her, surely -- CERTAINLY she got a beating from the mother
Oh, what a bother.
The trip to the mall was as disastrous as it could get.

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