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Lemon Juice Used as Ink (for those who understand): An unimportant musing.
Posted by Leo, Mar 30, 2009. 1155 views. ID = 2503

Lemon Juice Used as Ink (for those who understand)

Posted by Leo, Mar 30, 2009. 1155 views. ID = 2503
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Here I hide my deepest thoughts
Expressed in secret, hidden names
Flying flags to those who know
How I play my message game

Here I shared my love for you
Here I turned you loose that day
Knowing that you'd get the note
Broken-hearted, I walked away

Now I'll muse and ponder all
Write a poem, poorly timed
Make us both uncomfortable
Remembered feelings, cheaply rhymed

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Douglas
Mar 30, 2009
Actually, except for one line, I think this is very well timed, and the rhymes are nice and subtle, not cheaply rhymed at all. But, I suppose, my saying that kind of spoils the last stanza, doesn't it?

Nice job, anyway, I liked it!
   ~Posted by Douglas, Mar 30, 2009



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