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Wingless to the Light: First try at an Iambic Pentameter
Posted by BlackRose, Mar 21, 2009. 1091 views. ID = 2476

Wingless to the Light

Posted by BlackRose, Mar 21, 2009. 1091 views. ID = 2476
This post was written in 12 minutes.
I was inspired by a japanese animation i was playing at the time i wrote this. It's my very first try at an Iambic Pentameter.

Side note: I don't have a child myself so everything written was pure inspiration.
This post has been awarded 8 stars by 2 readers.

Awaiting for you to appear in dreams
Knowing i can't see your face any more
When you were alive you gave me my wings
But now you are gone i am now all torn.

Shadows surround me blocking the soft light
I try to stretch out to reach you in dreams
But try as i might i fall way away
I am now wingless waiting for the light

A light hand touches me bringing me back here
Pulling me around to reality
Reminds me that you are part of her
A child of our own i must now live for

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