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This Moment in Time: An attempt at an iambic pentameter
Posted by Chilly, Mar 20, 2009. 1457 views. ID = 2471

This Moment in Time

Posted by Chilly, Mar 20, 2009. 1457 views. ID = 2471
This post was written in 4 minutes.
This was something I put together for the writing prompt... feel free to critique
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She walks with style, and grace, she moves in rhyme
I check my watch, then gaze in toward her eyes
This moment, what I feel; it's lost in time
It's like my heart is floating through the skies

Now, while I'm waiting, pondering the past
Some memories have perspective at last

I wonder, does she know, a life was saved,
From isolation wrought with suffering
The pain of loneliness, my mind enslaved
Her gift of love is quite liberating!

She snaps her fingers, thoughts in mind subside
The night awaits, she says, it's cut and dried

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This post has been awarded 26 stars by 6 readers.
This post is part of a writing prompt: Iambic Pentameter

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erika
Sep 24, 2009
I really like your writing style.
   ~Posted by erika, Sep 24, 2009



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