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To Will
Posted by Daisy, Mar 16, 2009. 1279 views. ID = 2465
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What better way to write a line of verse
Than following the methods of the Bard
For countless times these lines I did rehearse
To verify the rhythm is not marred
To hear me tell myself di dum di dum
Did seem to some as proof that I’m not sound
So quietly I mouthed it in a hum
To keep my meter counting volume down
Be gentle to me reader of my words
Be kind as I am new to this old art
And thus I end my first iambic verse
Apologies to Will the Avon Bard
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Comments
Douglas
Mar 17, 2009 | Perfect rhythm, Daisy. Nicely done!
~Posted by Douglas, Mar 17, 2009 | 
Scribbler
Mar 17, 2009 | LOL! I did quite a bit of di dum di dumming myself!
~Posted by Scribbler, Mar 17, 2009 | 
amazing
May 13, 2009 | This made me smile-- I enjoyed it very much. The rhythm is quite lovely, too. I love "Will the Avon Bard"!
~Posted by amazing, May 13, 2009 |
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