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"statement": poem
Posted by Half-lit, Nov 4, 2008. 1078 views. ID = 1970

"statement"

Posted by Half-lit, Nov 4, 2008. 1078 views. ID = 1970
This post was written in 1 minutes.
this took a couple hours to slowly evolve, coming back to it between writing and reading. Pretty deep and I feel the punctuation is fair and appropriate.
This post has been awarded 7 stars by 2 readers.

Bequeath not the possession but time,
and offer not sun but the moon.
In weight and brevity declaration should not punish,
nor reprove, but last a lifetime and fulfill
in ones mind-perspective, truth!



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Mathax
Nov 4, 2008
You should always have the truth.
   ~Posted by Mathax, Nov 4, 2008



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