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"Friend in the Fall": Poem (triolet)
Posted by Half-lit, Nov 4, 2008. 1105 views. ID = 1969

"Friend in the Fall"

Posted by Half-lit, Nov 4, 2008. 1105 views. ID = 1969
This post was written in 8 minutes.
once again trying for the Triolet formula. I feel this one is better than the others if paid attention, in both meter and punctuation.
This post has been awarded 7 stars by 2 readers.

Bound by cold arms of the winter,
Now all the green browns, vary orange
From Ash to Oak
Bound by cold arms of the winter!
Zipped up the vested traveler
On the leash he would walk beside
Bound by cold arms of the winter
now all the green, browns, vary orange!



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