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Abbreviated Eternity: A fibonacci
Posted by Lynnde, Sep 1, 2008. 1834 views. ID = 1671

Abbreviated Eternity

Posted by Lynnde, Sep 1, 2008. 1834 views. ID = 1671
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It seems that a fibonacci, being so short, is the only type of poetry I ever have time to write. I don't even like it that much. (Yes, I know I originally posted that this was a haiku. I was very, very tired when I wrote it, and in too much of a hurry to finish it and go to bed, and I had been thinking about haikus a lot, so the word was on my mind.)

I thought of this after reading Lostcerebellum's " Drowning". It is sort of a rewrite of the first stanza.
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You.
Me.
Always
Together.
Or so you once said.
How long is forever to you?

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Comments


Douglas
Sep 2, 2008
Nice. Though...it's actually a Fibonacci Poem, not a haiku. :)
   ~Posted by Douglas, Sep 2, 2008

Lynnde
Sep 2, 2008
Yes, like I said, I was very very tired. Something about the posting didn't seem quite right, but I couldn't put my finger on it...Thanks.
   ~Posted by Lynnde, Sep 2, 2008



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