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Bitterness: Revenge and a rope
Posted by Jonas, Aug 5, 2008. 1082 views. ID = 1552

Bitterness

Posted by Jonas, Aug 5, 2008. 1082 views. ID = 1552
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I grabbed the rope. And squeezed with all my life. The veins in my arms beat with blood and the rhythm of my racing heart. This wasn’t going to happen again. I would kill him this time. There was no stopping me no one to help him. Just me and him and he was weak, weaker than the last one. And the one before. It was time, I will destroy all of my enemies that had once disrespected and spit on me. They will pay and this one will be the first.

The thick rope strained under the tension. My hands had little skin left as I heaved on the rope more and more but I wasn’t going to stop. There was no stopping me this time. I let out a laugh as he strained and finally it happened. He tripped and fell over the tape on the gym floor. Now I’m the king of tug of war.


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Comments


Douglas
Aug 6, 2008
Oh, man, you got me with this. I was getting quite disturbed by this piece, until the very end...
   ~Posted by Douglas, Aug 6, 2008

Katie
Aug 9, 2008
lol
*agrees with Doug*
Well done! :-)
   ~Posted by Katie, Aug 9, 2008



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