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clock and a heart: two things that kin of the same
Posted by outgoing, Apr 23, 2008. 1671 views. ID = 1181

clock and a heart

Posted by outgoing, Apr 23, 2008. 1671 views. ID = 1181
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Round face two nice hands
Spinning jumping unstopping
Pointed , busy hands


Beats in a rhythm
Beats a certain number of
Beats per a minute


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Douglas
Apr 23, 2008
nice. Just one little issue:

Pointed hands and busy hands has 7 syllables instead of five.

Changing it to Pointed, busy hands or Busy, pointed hands would fix that. :)
   ~Posted by Douglas, Apr 23, 2008



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