ADVICE: Backstage Before The Show

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Forum : 2007 - 2008 Anthology : ADVICE: Backstage Before The Show

Jeorge
Posted at: Mar 4, 2008 at 6:20 AM 
Well, Doug wanted me to test to see if the gallery links work in the forum now that I have my own directory. So, I thought I'd post this one, and see if anyone has suggestions on improving it. I think it's my favorite piece that I've written. :D

Back Stage Before the Show

Katie
Posted at: Mar 4, 2008 at 10:21 AM 
I really enjoyed this piece Jeorge! The only thing I think you should change is "What if I drop the ball? What if thousands of adoring fans watch me stumble and fall?"
It's slightly distracting to have this bit rhyme. But that's just my personal opinion. :-)
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