ADVICE: Nosies in the night.

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Forum : 2007 - 2008 Anthology : ADVICE: Nosies in the night.
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WOW
Posted at: Mar 2, 2008 at 12:50 PM 
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Isn't it funny how one little sentence can generate so many possibilities?

What about "I awoke last night to the sound of the piano playing downstairs"?
I like that!
Or, " I was awakened last night by the sound of..." That is better than what I put at first. I didn't like "by hearing" that I put in, but couldn't see the way out.

Douglas
Posted at: Mar 2, 2008 at 12:53 PM 
Bingo! That's the one that gets my vote.

Mathax
Posted at: Mar 18, 2008 at 10:01 AM 
Ok... Beside the point, I think that this is my best piece. does anyone else agree?

Katie
Posted at: Mar 18, 2008 at 1:47 PM 
Yes, I think that this is your best piece.

Mathax
Posted at: Apr 4, 2008 at 2:01 PM 
How about now?
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